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We waited in silence,
For a sound.
Something..

Anything really.
But nothing ever happened,
And no one ever came.

We waited for him.
But he never came.
A long plane ride in bitter silence,
Left alone with a crushing reality.

He was never coming home.

And we realize that no amount of wishin will bring him back to us.
But still we wait.
Wondering.

Wondering if he watches us or turns away in shame?
Wondering if he's proud of who we became?
Wondering if he will visit our dreams anymore?

We wonder..
And we wait in silence.
For a sound.

Something..

Anything.
writing belongs to me. :iconstyl-fly:
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LuciFidelitas Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist
It's beautimus....
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Sylvano-DRAGON Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Just... astonishing. It really impresses me how you can put your heart on the paper so easily...
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Styl-Fly Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you~
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Sylvano-DRAGON Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
my pleasure^^
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jeanann12 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow that is so deep i can write poems but this is somthing i cant go tht deep into
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Styl-Fly Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Awe, thanks~
I'm sure you can do it too, just gotta find something that gives you the right emotion.
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jeanann12 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
well i have some poems but not as deep but i always get in tht mood so its like write write write lol
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AmiaGail Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013
amazing! so many ideas could come from this!
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SirenaClaws Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Deep~
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SirenaClaws Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Deep~
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N3ffShark Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Student General Artist
/hug
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1idiz Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist
That was so sad and yet so beautiful :iconcraiplz:
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Kinglorshi Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Student Writer
Was worried this was a generic romance Poem. I'm not sure of your intentions, though, with that said. Personally, I'd like to perceive it as something about the loss of a family member or close friend. If that's the case, then that would be a very emotional piece.

If you did write something that's about a loving relationship, that's fine, it's just not my cup of tea. Solid writing to boot, and I like how it can be interpreted in various ways. :)
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Styl-Fly Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Student General Artist
thank you~
I wrote it to be more of my experience of loosing my father, He passed away when I was eight.
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Kinglorshi Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Student Writer
;-;

I did not need to know thus... I'm sorry if I "beat around the bush" or something...

This poem was good nonetheless. Again I'm sorry for making that come out. I'll be more careful in the future.
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Styl-Fly Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Ah no, it's fine. Don't worry about it :heart:
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TheNeonNinja11 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Did something happen..? And this is beautiful, by the way .... :heart:
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Styl-Fly Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Student General Artist
No, nothing happened.
Not recently anyways, I just felt like writing something quickly before my class started.

and thank you~ :heart:
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TheNeonNinja11 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's good to hear though.. And you are so welcome~
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